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Gael

Loved the story and the sound effects you put in.

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Anna

This is awesome! The visuals were really neat - I liked how the bullies were black silhouettes. You did a great job of making the main character relatable to an audience. This was a good story for young children who need to find a balance between independence, self-confidence, and compassion. The jump from a school/home setting and Jake trapped under a boulder was confusing to me, and the dialogue was unrealistic, in my opinion. Jake had a boulder stuck on top of him, but didn't seem to really be harmed, and was calm and collected when he was rescued. Overall, the story and moral were very strong.

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Tanner

nice moral to resinate with kids today

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Angel

i like the art

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Niccolo

I really like the moral of the story and I also like the way you expressed the characters feelings

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Brendan

I feel like this would make a good coming-of-age story

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Jake needs help

Jake is a stuck up boy who needs to be batter and stronger than everyone buy why will shock you

I would like to thank my mom.
Some people who I wouldn’t like to thank is Max carigan and elle Cochran I spent my entire week working on this whole max played Fortnite. Elle quit are team 4 weeks ago. So I might seem bitter but I did this “group” assignment by myself.

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Hudson

Angela, Elle, Hudson, Max

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