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Love the drawings and moral of the story!
First of all, the music pulls the video together. I also like how clear the story is, and how you used narration by the characters. Great job!
This story was nice, with a good moral. I wonder though, do Kyle and James live on the ranch or do they have a separate home? Because in the story they sell the ranch and move away, but then one of the brothers returns to their home. If the ranch is their home and they sold it, that wouldn't make sense for the brother to return to the ranch if it no longer belongs to them. Did he return to buy it back?
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