Megan

I love this film, it has such a heartfelt message, something that everybody on the planet wants: a friend. Awesome backstory with Bait's parents leaving her behind and having the jellyfish coming in to save the day. There were a few awkward pauses in the VoiceOver audio, but other than that, I really liked it! Awesome job!

Ian

Not much room for improvement there. What became of the mean octopus? Very strong.

Story

That was good! I liked it a lot but I actually felt like you could've done what Connie He(the last speaker) suggested and done away with narration and voice acting. Your story was so clear and your illustrations were so good, that I think it would make perfect sense with music instead of dialog. Otherwise nice work!

Prachi

I really like your story! One thing I would suggest is maybe adding some music in to when the octopus is chasing Bait and when she gets stuck in the plastic bag to build up some suspense. But other then that it was great and I like the drawings!

Christian

Very cute story, I liked how Bait's journey was scary at times and fulfilling at others. Good art too!

Steven

very cool drawing style

Lila

love the drawings, so cute!

Roen

Very cute!

Kyla

I really like your story. I have been following it from the beginning and you have developed it very well. I like the colors with the drawings, visual storytelling, the message, and how you structure your whole story. Good job!

Sophia

Nice music and sound to enhance the story. A very feel good story!

Jacqueline

I really liked the character designs! A mushroom jellyfish sounds really cool, and Bait's long tail adds a lot to the classic goldfish design!

Nalani

Love the use of music. very happy with the ending. Its sad to be lonely, but great way to end the story. Gives everyone hope!