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Mitch is an alcoholic detective in need of adventure, unsatisfied with his job and life. One day he comes across a murder, and a note and watch in the pocket of the victim. This sets off a series of events that shape Mitches life forever.
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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