Andrea

I feel that by the slogan “better to be lucky than smart”, you were going to upload the whole story reel, but for what I’m seeing, this is only the act 1. However, I like the use of sounds and colors. I would love to be able to capture your main character a little better, as sometimes it gave the feeling that i was only looking at scribbles. Understanding the dynamic you want to do, I get why you made your drawing that way but I feel that we need to be able to see the figure a little bit more clearly to understand what’s happening. I hope you get to continue your following acts!

Manuela

Hey there, I love what you got so far. The music and all the movement and transition is very catchy. The use of color with that green dice is very smart and it helps me understand that maybe all the luck is coming from there. I get a glimpse of how are main character is and his personality. I think that is is only act 1, so I hop you finish your story even after this class is over. Good luck!