Turtle Journey, Act 1, Act 2, Act 3
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I really enjoy the art and the story!
The artwork and concept is very amazing!
this is very cute art
I think the emotion of the story is fear and new things. I think the moral of the story is that everyone has their own views and that affects how they think.
The story line is good. I think music and adding color to turtle would make it more interesting and add some depth. I like the ending.
The drawing of the turtle/rat and the scenes are very nice.
the turtlel is very cute and cool
I enjoyed your story! I think adding some character voices and thoughts would be very interesting and add depth to the story. Great job! :)
I really like your artwork and your story, i suggest to add music to make it more engaging :)
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Turtle's Journey Act 1, Act 2, Act 3
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