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Turtle Journey, Act 1, Act 2, Act 3

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Ella

I really enjoy the art and the story!

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Krista

The artwork and concept is very amazing!

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Aries

this is very cute art

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Jak

I think the emotion of the story is fear and new things. I think the moral of the story is that everyone has their own views and that affects how they think.

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Kyla

The story line is good. I think music and adding color to turtle would make it more interesting and add some depth. I like the ending.

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Kevin

The drawing of the turtle/rat and the scenes are very nice.

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Marc

the turtlel is very cute and cool

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Krista

*turtle

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Madeline

I enjoyed your story! I think adding some character voices and thoughts would be very interesting and add depth to the story. Great job! :)

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Mónica

I really like your artwork and your story, i suggest to add music to make it more engaging :)

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Turtle's Journey Act 1, Act 2, Act 3

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