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I like how the story progresses, but I do wish that you made the audio clearer and wrapped up the ending more. Otherwise, good start.
Why did they leave, nice drawings.
I like the story but maybe talk a little louder
Good work and decent drawings, it had a good moral too.
Why did they have to pack up and leave. Nice drawing. Good close up.
Good speaking and art. Why did they have to leave
Make sure everybody is talking at the same pitch and have your pictures more clear. I like your story and the shots of your pictures.
I can’t hear very well so it is hard to give feedback
needa detail on why they were trabeling, and why did he have to kill his brother in order to become leader, is it a custom or somthing else?
Great drawings! But I'm confused on the point of the story, I need more context on why he killed his brother. Your a young kid and will have a great future. You guys are very intelligent for your age. Good Job!
"you guys are young kids and will both have a great future"
I really like the story ark, but I think there could have been a better way for the brother to become the leader I don't think he should have just killed him.
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