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Lil nee act 2

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Aaron

very confused.

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Gabriella

aye lil knee back at it again! the town being abandoned is really interesting.

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Ian

The thing at 0:17 in the video kind of reminds me of a Hobbit hole. What does Lil Nee want to do? This will be stronger if a reason for this journey is provided.

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Thomas

I'm a little bit confused about where the story is going, but I'm really excited to see.

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William

I liked the character design
I didn't understand what career he is going for
I think you could add more to the story of the towns abandonment

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Sommers

Art work is cold. could we develop more on why the town was abandoned.

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Fabio

I like the story and the drawings

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Yovanny

i like the story and the way its colored
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Jose

I like the story.

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Eva

Lil Nee is back! And better than ever.

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Camden

Cool drawings

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Coby

Cool drawings great job

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Peyton

cool drawing W story 💪💪

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Taylor

nice

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Owen

This is good

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Ana

I like your idea
I wonder what career he wants to start

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