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Lil nee act 2
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Aaron
very confused.
Gabriella
aye lil knee back at it again! the town being abandoned is really interesting.
Ian
The thing at 0:17 in the video kind of reminds me of a Hobbit hole. What does Lil Nee want to do? This will be stronger if a reason for this journey is provided.
Thomas
I'm a little bit confused about where the story is going, but I'm really excited to see.
William
I liked the character design
I didn't understand what career he is going for
I think you could add more to the story of the towns abandonment
Sommers
Art work is cold. could we develop more on why the town was abandoned.
Fabio
I like the story and the drawings
Yovanny
i like the story and the way its colored
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Jose
I like the story.
Eva
Lil Nee is back! And better than ever.
Camden
Cool drawings
Coby
Cool drawings great job
Peyton
cool drawing W story 💪💪
Taylor
nice
Owen
This is good
Ana
I like your idea
I wonder what career he wants to start
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Act 2 of lil nee story
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Roman Parker
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