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Story Xperiential Week 5 Submission
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What did you find confusing or unclear?
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What suggestions do you have to make it stronger?
Jose
good idea.
Blanki
I liked your idea but in the end I got confused, I didn't know why they were arrested, I hope you know how to put together your ideas and that the story is better luck.
Blanki
Your story is very good and the drawings are very creative. They interest me. I would like to know a little more about the characters.
Alan
Next time make the video present more of the picture because it is hard to see it.
Reid
Zoom in on the picture a little bit
Cameron
What are the minor beats
Kacey
I like the art and story of this. One thing is you could have added more minor beats.
Mila
Your story idea is cool and I like the art. One thing I would like to know more about is your character. I believe that introducing more about your character can allow the audience to grow an opinion about him and understand his wants and needs better.
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My submission for week 5.
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Youth 1 (High School)
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