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Story Xperiential Week 5 Submission

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Jose

good idea.

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Blanki

I liked your idea but in the end I got confused, I didn't know why they were arrested, I hope you know how to put together your ideas and that the story is better luck.

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Blanki

Your story is very good and the drawings are very creative. They interest me. I would like to know a little more about the characters.

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Alan

Next time make the video present more of the picture because it is hard to see it.

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Reid

Zoom in on the picture a little bit

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Cameron

What are the minor beats

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Kacey

I like the art and story of this. One thing is you could have added more minor beats.

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Mila

Your story idea is cool and I like the art. One thing I would like to know more about is your character. I believe that introducing more about your character can allow the audience to grow an opinion about him and understand his wants and needs better.

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