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A Mysterious Mirror

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Mason

I like how this story is starting.

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Jose

I like the concept of the story.

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Austin

You did the best you could. Nice work.

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Truman

Good drawings I like the idea

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Levi

Um good story but can you say and not just take a picture to speed through it just to get it done

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Penny

I mean this with absolutely no ill will whatsoever: Did you read the statement I wrote at the top explaining what happened and why I COULDN'T do exactly that?

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Rosalynn

It would be much better if you read what you typed, but you may keep quiet if you feel it is better.

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Lance

Great idea

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Donovan

I really like how the phone and mirror raised questions but I would prefer you talk

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Sara

I like the suspense - the looking and ignoring her phone and the mirror raised a lot of questions.
There was not too anything I was confused about
I wonder if you could give more internal thinking- giving voice to her decision to enter the cave -or even ignore the phone- would help reveal her personality.

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I did the best I could. Believe me I was extremely upset to miss last week and I feel TERRIBLE even now! Sorry!

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