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Oscar

I like the character, she is relatable to people I know. I find unclear on why she needs to move, and why the mother chose a place that doesn't allow cats. The art and the story seems great! it can go places.

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Maddie

Thank you!

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Thomas

I love the art, and the story is really clear. Great job!

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Maddie

Thanks!

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Elizabeth (1 like)

Like how you made Amaya have to face problems like losing her cat and teaching how she can live without her cat.

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Melissa

Thank you!

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amelia

I adore Amaya's design and what she has to learn! This is such a valuable life lesson and I'm sure will positively affect the viewers :)

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Melissa

Thank you so much!

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Zhilu (1 like)

I like her design and the challenge because if I’m in her shoes I just can’t make the decision! I’m looking forward for your final project

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Melissa

Thanks so much!

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Sandhya (1 like)

I LOVE this character! The lesson is one that could be very helpful for a lot of people. Is Raven her cat? And if so, why is she not allowed to take Raven with her?

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Melissa

Raven was a stray Amaya found when they moved to their house, and her mother wasn’t fond of the idea to begin with.

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Melissa

And thank you!

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This is Amaya, a 12 year old human girl!

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