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Oscar
I like the character, she is relatable to people I know. I find unclear on why she needs to move, and why the mother chose a place that doesn't allow cats. The art and the story seems great! it can go places.
Maddie
Thank you!
Thomas
I love the art, and the story is really clear. Great job!
Maddie
Thanks!
Elizabeth (1 like)
Like how you made Amaya have to face problems like losing her cat and teaching how she can live without her cat.
Melissa
Thank you!
amelia
I adore Amaya's design and what she has to learn! This is such a valuable life lesson and I'm sure will positively affect the viewers :)
Melissa
Thank you so much!
Zhilu (1 like)
I like her design and the challenge because if I’m in her shoes I just can’t make the decision! I’m looking forward for your final project
Melissa
Thanks so much!
Sandhya (1 like)
I LOVE this character! The lesson is one that could be very helpful for a lot of people. Is Raven her cat? And if so, why is she not allowed to take Raven with her?
Melissa
Raven was a stray Amaya found when they moved to their house, and her mother wasn’t fond of the idea to begin with.
Melissa
And thank you!
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This is Amaya, a 12 year old human girl!
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