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Week 7

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Anna

This story is awesome! As some other commenters said, I would love if the sound was consistent throughout the video; I had to turn my volume up in some parts, and down in others. The main emotion I felt during the story was sadness that the events were unfortunate for the characters, but I was happy that it all eventually turned out well. The moral of the story is a bit ambiguous to me, though - is it that people should try to stretch themselves and try new things?

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Donovan

Like story
Like drawing
Talk louder
Better audio

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Andrea

Talk louder. Maybe you could record somewhere with less background noise. I like your story and how it connects to social studies.

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Erin

I like the story and the drawings

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Preston

I liked the pictures. Could’ve talked louder and clearer

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Isaac

The audio was loud at first then quiet

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Owen

I like the story. I like the action. You could improve the drawings.

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Jesse

Blurry pictures
Some parts are loud
Some parts are quiet
Background noise

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Ian

Kameron needs to talk louder. Get rid of background noise. Good drawings. You guys spoke very clearly!

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kadynce

I like your story and pictures but I think you should have less background noise and try to talk more clearly.

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Bree

I like the story idea. You could have better volume and talk a bit slower.

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Lance

Blurry pictures
Some parts are loud
Some parts are quiet
Background noise

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Jackson

Less background noise
Talk louder
Cool story
Cool pictures

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An

It can be a little more clear if you had added a few more minor images.

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Romel

I think it needs more details on why they left their homes, and how did they get to the point where they were attacking others

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Carlos

Needs a more understanding to the story

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Cooper

I think some of the events are really random, and many events don't make sense, or just feel out of place.

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