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Julian

good idea

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Kervin

what good ideas

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Romel

its a good story, althought i think it needs more detail on why they needed to get to oregan or why did one get shot

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Alan

I like your story. And I like your drawings.

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Ashton (1 like)

I like the idea.

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Taylor (1 like)

I like the idea

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Aiden (1 like)

I like your idea. It’s a good story with good drawings

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Peyton (1 like)

It’s a good idea

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Owen (1 like)

Your idea is very good

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Elyse (1 like)

I like that you start the story with a very clear issue of the characters being hungry and needing food. That is a strong goal and motivator for the storytelling. It would be good to know a little more about the main characters. Why do they want to go to Oregon? And why do the Pinkertons attack them? I look forward to seeing what happens in the story.

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