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THE PRINCESS AND THE WITCH

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Caden

Very good drawing. A little hard to hear over the music

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Jak

The art is great, you don't need much to still tell a good story. The music is played all around, in some parts it just doesn't fit like in act 2 and the princess was dead.

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Romel

I think it needs a little more details

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Oscar

The art is nice but I think you could've made the pictures more clear with better lighting but that's just me. I don't understand why the witch lives so close by. Nice story.

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William

I liked the story! The art is nice, but I think it could have used some cropping. I am a little unclear about why the witch lives so close by. Great story!

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Roen

This is quite a nice story, I liked that you kept it simple.

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The story is all about a princess and a witch who later decided to bewitch the princess because of envy but later the princess is back to normal.

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