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Sam

My favorites are the first and second, I think the possibility's are pretty endless with those ideas

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Ysabella

I Love your prompts, art style, and animation so much!! Everything is just so well done.

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Sophia Rose Imelda

THE ANIMATION IS SOOOO GOOD! Your framing is amazing, and the subtle movememnts convey the story perfectly. This is a skill many people struggle to master. My favorite idea you came up with is the criminal one. I think it has a lot of potential. I can already tell that you're going to come up with an amazing story.

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Jiuhe

Love the style, especially love the last idea, I often think what if one day I wake up and I'm sleeping on my ceiling and everything else is still normal.

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Chris

Like many others in the comments, I love the fact you animated it a little bit! I suggest combining idea one and two, making a child wake up in the body of a wanted criminal! the ideas are unique and its clear you put a lot of time into this. Awesome!

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Penny

Gosh, it's hard to choose a favorite between the first and second ideas. The first has a lot of potential for the child as a villain character, unaware of the true consequences their choices would now have on everyone. Or maybe they are aware and, in childish fashion, are selfish with the powers? The second idea is also very fun, it makes me imagine all sorts of hijinks that the poor victim of this bodyswap would get roped into.

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Kevin

Nice sketches and ideas, I especially like the "What if a child got the powers of a God"

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Ava

I really like your drawing style, and your questions were very creative! The first one makes me wonder how the child got that power and if it would lead to chaos, because the child might have a lack of experience (or would they have the wisdom of an experienced god)?

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Jose

I really like the first idea.

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Angel

i like the idea of a child being given the power of a god, i think it would be interesting to see how they discover it and a possible explanation as to how they got it

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Finn

i like the art style

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Cam

I like that idea about gravity suddenly being turned off. I think that that could become a great start to a story.

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Mia Bella

I was most drawn to idea #2, It's an exciting concept and it can build suspense and anticipation. It makes me wonder what the character's personality will be like because it'll definitely affect the decisions they make while in the criminals body.

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Kiara

I really liked the idea of someone waking up in the body of a wanted criminal since there are a lot of different ways that you can tell this story and different genres you can choose from. It makes me wonder what I would do if this happened to me. I also wonder why specifically that person switched bodies with the criminal. Nothing was unclear I think it's pretty easy to understand!

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Megan

hi!!!! i really loved your what ifs!! i liked how creative they all were. i think my favorite one was what if you woke up in the body of a wanted criminal. it made me wonder the main character would respond in that situation because there are so many different ways a character could could react to that scenario depending on their personality and id love to see that explored! really good job!!

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Rowan

obsessed with your animation and the dynamics of your art! my favorite idea was the "giving a child the power of a god," because that kind of story could be told as a comedy or a gut wrenching tragedy. I'm confused about if the child had godlike powers over the people of earth, or maybe a different planet?

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Story

First off, I love your drawings and animation! My favorite of your "What Ifs"are your first and last. I love the first one because I think it could be really beautiful but also have an easy conflict (Because that's a lot of power for a child). I like your last idea too, but I'm a little confused on the plot line vs the concept. Is the plot to find gravity again? Or figure out what happened to it? Or is everyone happy in a world with no gravity? What exactly is that film about?

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ava

Absolutely love the animation you added! I think the second idea of waking up as a wanted criminal sounds super interesting along with the first idea! Super excited to see what you come up with!

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Asata

Awesome ideas and amazing art! I love the idea with waking up as a wanted criminal, I think it would make for a story with a lot of good stakes and obstacles, as well as the question of how the body change occurred in the first place. Was it a swap? and in that case what is the criminal doing with the other person's body?

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Melissa

Dude this is AMAZING. The slight animation, the art style, the ideas, everything! So excited to see what you come up with in the future.

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Jeydin (1 like)

Woah! Nice animations! I really like the idea of what a child could do with the power of a god because it can either be really good and fun, or also go completely sideways and be one heck of a force to be reckon with. It makes me wonder how or who the child would get their powers, and why bestow it upon a child. Your ideas are really well put and I'm excited to see what you make with them. :D

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Torben (1 like)

These Ideas have a ton of potential. I think that the person waking up in the body of the criminal is the most interesting to me, because it could go so many ways, and it makes me wonder how he could live that life, get back to his old self, or clear his name or something else unique. Also your animation is pretty cool. If you put your mind to these, you can make some pretty good masterpieces.

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