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Cowspiracy Acts 1 + 2

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Christian

good imagines

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Eli

This is amazing. I love the concept and the drawings are awesome and the execution to create tension and build up is awesome! I wonder if a little bit more detail could make a couple parts clearer. For instance, why did he have to cover the election? Is there someone abusing power there too? How could he tell that the candidates were cows? Could anyone else tell? I love this and I absolutely want to see more of it. This is awesome.

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Jose

The story is very unique and interesting.

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Aiden

I don’t get why the farmers went missing

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Ava

I like the art work, can’t really understand what you are saying.

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Finn (1 like)

This is a very unique plot! I love it! How did nobody else see that the crowd was full of cows?

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Julia

because they were hiding behind the podium :p

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Nelson (1 like)

nice art

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Ben (1 like)

An explanation to how he found out about the cows should be added, but other than that, this is a good start.

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Prachi (1 like)

It is very unique to have the antagonists be cows pretending to be people. Why do other people not find it odd that farmers are going missing? And how does the main character find out that the people are cows? I also like the drawings!

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