Leone Act 1
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Great dramatic reading! I appreciate that you defined better "maximizing time" in terms of having to work and how those clocks end up defining who is upper and lower class. You may not have time to do this, but you could SHOW this instead of telling by having snippets of life lin the world!
I like the drawings.
really nice art style
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