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Julian

Interesting story

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Nate

Interesting story! I am very curious to see where it goes. Are the Indians the antagonists here? Or are you planning to make him see his fault in trying to take land where others live?

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Thomas

I really like the story, and I'm curious to see where it's headed, because I feel like you've really left your options open.

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Christian

what are is name the History

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Owen

I like the video but every one should talk

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Jackson

#cool #number1victoryroyal #amazing

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Ian (1 like)

Very good story I’m very absorbed (hooked into your story)

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Jesse (4 likes)

Very #electric (really interesting and hooked to the story)

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Jesse (4 likes)

Fantastic Story! I am very intrigued.

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Mia (2 likes)

Very snazzy(cool)

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