Bryce

I love the art and the story is very interested. Can’t wait to see the final product.

Evan

I love the artwork of the fish. I felt sad when vivs grandma got sick.

Kyla

I really like your story. It has a feeling of a hero's journey. The artwork is very good and works with the story line well. Very good pacing.

Ben

I don't remember if I commented on this before, but I really like the art in this story. It gives off an etherial tone. I also really like the story, but I don't have any major comments or complaints with it. Overall, good work this week!

Julian

Love the art and story. What editing and drawing apps do you use?

Zoe

Ahhhh thank you so much! i use procreate with the ink bleed brush and apple pencil and Levi uses Adobe Spark :)

Giulia

the art and plot are absolutely amazing!

Julian

I like your art work

Bertha

i like your art work

Mónica

I really like your artwork :)

Stephanie

This is amazing, great artwork! I wish I could see more visuals for how Viv fell in love with the surface i.e. the trees, land, the general beauty and difference between underwater and the surface etc.

Blanki

You are really good at creating stories, I like it a lot, it is interesting and well, the drawings make you feel more familiar with the story, very good work indeed.

David

The art is really impressive and terrific! I love it

Enrique

The art is very good.

Alan

Nice animation

Ella

Great job! I think that you story is very clear, but I think that one thing you can add details to is how they know that is the cure.

Ella

I also think that your drawings are amazing!

Brennan

the drawings are cool why the queen lets anyone go and why the parents let there daughter go to the surface if it is so dangerous and you can make it stronger my making it harder for her to get the the surface and to get the poison like it is not in the first ouse they see or they have to make it.

Odin

I like how the charecters mature throughout the movie, I find it a little confusing why it just cuts off at the end without sound, and to make it stronger try adding detail about why the mom just lets her go on such a crazy adventure without supervision. and why the queen just says yes to any random person

Gina

the character designs are beautiful! great story, i loved how it turned out :)

Sanne

I liked your story and the art is amazing. The only thing I'm wondering is, does anyone happen to speak Latin?

Johnathan

i like the art and the story how it played out

Steven

The story, the pacing, and the animation is all a 10/10. This my favorite of all the ones I've seen so far.