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Creative Journey (WIP) (Sarah Estes)

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Karen

Hello!! I love the character design and how her poses are very dynamic, also the use of the different camera angles. Maybe to tell the story first you could upload a rough sketch version then do the clean up. :)

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Andrea

The creative process and all the struggle in starting a project is a great theme for a short! I love your drawings, they are clear and expressive. Hope you can finish the sotry! Best wishes!

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Varian

I like the mood and emotion it sets and would just like to encourage you to keep working on that idea. You might created something great. We could not finish our project either, but I think it's worth working on.
I hope I can find your reel finished and ready at some point.
Don't give up and good luck on your finals!

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Tracy

I love the feeling of this piece! Anxiety, frustration, hopelessness, and yet she reaches forward to start. It's optimistic! And that's how I feel about the potential of this story. Really well done!

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Samantha

I love your art style, you capture movement well and it's very pleasing to look at. Your story idea is very relatable to artists! I hope you're able to finish this project and that you do well on your finals.

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Jordan

I like the story of wanting to have a perfect project but you don't know how to approach that or execute that. Its a relatable issue with artists that want to have perfection. The art style is unique and cute as well. I think music would've made the story stronger, but overall I enjoyed it!

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Christopher

Love the artwork. I wasn’t sure about what the story was about, but don’t feel bad… we didn’t finish either. :)

Keep up the great work! Looks amazing!

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Antonio

I love the energy and expression of your drawings. I would love to see how this story develops!

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Kara

Your art renderings are very impressive and expressive! Congratulations!

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Aranza

I like that your draws are very expresive! And very cute!

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Due to finals, and other obstacles we won't be able to finish this project for the deadline, but I hope you enjoy our work for what we do have!

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Kayla (Think tank)
Lydia (Think tank)

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