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Teagan

Like your story’s and pictures.

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David

Good job! Nice drawing

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Marco

I like the drawings

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Harris

I really liked the moral of the story, i think you did a great job

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Dylan

it was confusing as to what the moral is because the video ended before you had finished talking.

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Teagan

I couldn't really understand but LOVED the pictures.

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Hanna

I liked the world building you used in this story, as well as the unexpected decisions that were made, which made the story exciting. I would like to see why Emma gave off light and was different from the other people in the village.

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That was good! I actually felt like it would be a really good feature film vs a short film. I liked your use of color and your narration was good. I think music could've helped to keep me engaged but otherwise nice job.

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Nancy

I liked the story spine. The idea is unique. I love the idea of a town that thinks everything is ok when it’s not! The art was good. Maybe a little but of letting the pictures telling the story instead of narration would have been nice. I like the fact that the couple got their baby.

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Hellen

thanks alot

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