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Roommates all Acts
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Gabriel (1 like)
Your story is very interesting and the drawings are nice.
Claire (1 like)
The art, perspective, and expressions are amazing!! I do think that you should make a more clear reason for all the things that have happened, and explain better the course of events.
Jeydin (1 like)
Aww, I like your characters, they're so UwU cute! I like how the MC is a relatable character, especially to me XD, and he was able to live a joyful life with someone he wouldn't think he would: a leopard. I am a little confused as to why he would be embarrassed by the fox friend, wouldn't he be happy to see her if they're friends? Nothing else was unclear.
Blanki (1 like)
Your story is interesting and well the drawings are very good you have done a good job.
Sugey (1 like)
very nice drawing
Jose (1 like)
Very good I liked it a lot and the excellent drawings.
Fernando (1 like)
Story is Good and The art is great Good Job
Quinn (1 like)
this is a cool story. I like the animation and the ending.
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Act 3 is where Ivan made his choice of leaving the house, while driving he thought about his time with Layla and even though he didn't like it he really enjoyed it. He went back and told Layla that he wants to stay with her, Ivan is living with Layla and being a better impala. It ends with them looking at the view.
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