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Christopher

The expression and coloring is done really well. The table shape makes me confused as to whether he's baking at a table or a counter.

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Braden

I love the expression on the character's face! This whole scene is very creative, and it makes me wonder why this person is so bad at baking! The emotion and chaos of this piece is portrayed very well.

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Sophia Rose Imelda

Love your use of shape and color!

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ava (1 like)

Love the characters design and colors you used! The story you're going for too sounds like so much fun and I think you really portrayed the emotion of the character in this scene well. Can't wait to see more!

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Makena

Wow thank you so very much :D!!!

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Emma (1 like)

I adore your use of light and expression in your drawing! The intention behind your character design and the composition are very clear, so I can't wait to see this story develop! Your art style is so unique, so I always come back to your page to see your submissions :)

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Makena

Oh my gosh you are literally so sweet 😭 thank you so much!

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Jose

I really like the idea behind the drawing. It makes me wanting to know if he's able to build that relationship with his granddaughter again.

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Myleyby

wow this art is amazing. i love the art work and the story idea so far

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MacKenzie

I love your story so much (and your art) but I don't have enough time to give good feedback so I wanna say I love the story!!

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Cam

I really like how you used light in the background to highlight your character. I think it really conveys emotion with po's expression. great drawing!

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Kaden

I really love the art style and the drawing and I think you have a really good idea.

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Jacinta

I really like your coloring and the story idea.

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Mataya

I like the creative idea and how many details and colors.

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Levi

Super nice art! Great Job drawing! It already looks like it’s a great plot set up!

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Elina

Wow the character design is super unique! I love the color palette and all of the tiny details on the table!

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Vladyslav (1 like)

The story sounds really intriguing! And, I see I'm not the only one to say this, but he DOES REALLY look like Mr. Bobinsky from Coraline! :)

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Makena

Oh my gosh thank you! while designing him he didn't even start off as blue but I just thought he needed more character and noticed he somehow seemed familiar haha. now I know why!😂

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Mónica (1 like)

Wow, i really love your art style :), he reminds me of Mr. Bobinsky from Coraline too, haha.

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Grace

I love this character design! Its so unique, and defintely a story I have never seen before. I'm looking forward to seeing the finished result, it looks so fun! Good work!

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Sanne

I really like you art style and I can tell the character is in over his head!

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Gina (1 like)

I love his character design! He reminds me of Mr. Bobinsky from Coraline haha

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Makena

Oh my gosh thank you! while designing him he didn't even start off as blue but I just thought he needed more character and noticed he somehow seemed familiar haha. now I know why!😂

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Po, a once extroverted grandfather has become a introverted loner. While his granddaughter was younger, him and her spent as much time baking together as possible. Now that his granddaughter has grown up, moved away, and forgot to keep in touch with Po, Po decides to try and achieve a dream that him and his granddaughter always wanted. Their own bakery. Despite Po’s eager attitude he finds that he can’t do this alone….

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