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What If - Mónica Juárez

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Maya

Our favorite was your third idea. We found it intriguing that it could go in many different directions. Your art is so pretty!

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Mia (1 like)

My favorite what if question was definitely the third one! It makes me wonder more about what might happen if she lost her magical book and also how she got separated from her family.

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Steven (1 like)

I love these ideas specifically number 1.

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Mya (1 like)

I think your what ifs a very possible to be a story

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Lucía (1 like)

I loved the last one, but how did she got separated from them?

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Braden (1 like)

I really enjoyed how these ideas were unique and interesting! I wonder if the girl who could transport into a photo album would mess up the timeline? Also, I found it a little unclear about wether humans have ever lived on Earth or if this is a different dimension.

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Seneca (1 like)

All of these are really good! I personally like #3 the most

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Eamon (1 like)

My favorite idea was #1. I wonder what the explorers would think of earth.

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Ethan (1 like)

i like your ideas

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Emma (2 likes)

I think my favourite What If idea was the one with the brother who was a spirit guide to the other one. It’s a really creative idea and I like how they still get to be together in a way to go on their adventure.
It makes me wonder how the one brother is able to see the other brother and if maybe that brother could see ghosts or something similar, and if he’s able to communicate with his brother or if he can only see the dead brother.

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