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Mason

I like how you explained why they were afraid of their shadow this time.

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Pengyu

I think the combination of the simple and cute drawings that are filled with details and the intriguing and attractive story is really great.

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Evan

The art was lovely. The lines were very lush. The scene where the lights goes out I don't understand why it's contrasted.

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Thomas

This video does a really good job at having a good story and great artwork. Really cool!

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Max

good artwork! really like your story. Great work!

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Jak

I like how an everyday thing now causes fear to Alex. How do the shadows change how society works in this world? Could you show how other peoples lives change.

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Hazel

I love your story, and plot. Your art style is amazing. :D

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Ben

This is an intriguing and surprisingly deep story. One question, though: Does the virtual stuff imply that this takes place during the pandemic? I don't know if that's what the story was trying to imply, but I'd like some clarification. Other than that, it's a great story so far!

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Gavin

Love the drawings, simple but very nice and still detailed.

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Myleyby

super interesting!

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In this world shadows show peoples true emotions and Alex doesn’t like their shadow. They feel it exposes them and they do everything they can to prevent it from showing up from online school to constantly keeping lights on. It all goes down hill when the power goes out and Alex must use a flashlight and confront their shadow.

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