ferris and gordon crazy insane adenturwe ft mozila fox
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the drawing shoes good accents.
Drawing work out so lovley and love the vibriant of the colors!
This would be stronger with audio going the whole way through. I like this topic. I can't tell which one is Ferris, and which one is Gordon.
amazing drawing. the pictures are kind of blank. more explaning would be nice.
The cartoon style of your drawings are pretty neat. I think the background is a bit empty. Great work
I like the story a lot. My one suggestion would be to make your narration a little more fluent with fewer breaks.
Nice simple drawing,good storyline
like the simple drawings
Cute characters and interesting story.
wonderful drawing and story.
the awesome stud they do what the whole story was about make sure there is audio
I like the story, I find it confusing how you cut the audio, make it stronger by not doing that
I liked that the rustaceans were able to identify the negative pulls in life and walk away in order to pursue positive growth.
I wondered why they decided to leave?
Can you give more reactions? What was it about the mountain that they thought was was not for them?
I really liked the art and colors in this story spine. I am unclear on the plot. Do the mascots go on adventures together? Is this what makes them awesome? Why do they go to the mountain and then the circus?
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ms syd class :)
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