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Abdulla

Nice drawing!

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Christian

good

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Gabriella

the drawing shoes good accents.

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Tanner

Drawing work out so lovley and love the vibriant of the colors!

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Ian

This would be stronger with audio going the whole way through. I like this topic. I can't tell which one is Ferris, and which one is Gordon.

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Haley

amazing drawing. the pictures are kind of blank. more explaning would be nice.

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Evan

The cartoon style of your drawings are pretty neat. I think the background is a bit empty. Great work

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Thomas

I like the story a lot. My one suggestion would be to make your narration a little more fluent with fewer breaks.

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Preston

Nice simple drawing,good storyline

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Grace

Good storyline

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Nelson

like the simple drawings

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Kelvin

Cute characters and interesting story.

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Andrew

wonderful drawing and story.

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Brennan

the awesome stud they do what the whole story was about make sure there is audio

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Odin

I like the story, I find it confusing how you cut the audio, make it stronger by not doing that

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Sara

I liked that the rustaceans were able to identify the negative pulls in life and walk away in order to pursue positive growth.
I wondered why they decided to leave?
Can you give more reactions? What was it about the mountain that they thought was was not for them?

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Mattie

I really liked the art and colors in this story spine. I am unclear on the plot. Do the mascots go on adventures together? Is this what makes them awesome? Why do they go to the mountain and then the circus?

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