Abdulla

Nice drawing!

Christian

good

Gabriella

the drawing shoes good accents.

Tanner

Drawing work out so lovley and love the vibriant of the colors!

Ian

This would be stronger with audio going the whole way through. I like this topic. I can't tell which one is Ferris, and which one is Gordon.

Haley

amazing drawing. the pictures are kind of blank. more explaning would be nice.

Evan

The cartoon style of your drawings are pretty neat. I think the background is a bit empty. Great work

Thomas

I like the story a lot. My one suggestion would be to make your narration a little more fluent with fewer breaks.

Preston

Nice simple drawing,good storyline

Grace

Good storyline

Nelson

like the simple drawings

Kelvin

Cute characters and interesting story.

Andrew

wonderful drawing and story.

Brennan

the awesome stud they do what the whole story was about make sure there is audio

Odin

I like the story, I find it confusing how you cut the audio, make it stronger by not doing that

Sara

I liked that the rustaceans were able to identify the negative pulls in life and walk away in order to pursue positive growth.
I wondered why they decided to leave?
Can you give more reactions? What was it about the mountain that they thought was was not for them?

Mattie

I really liked the art and colors in this story spine. I am unclear on the plot. Do the mascots go on adventures together? Is this what makes them awesome? Why do they go to the mountain and then the circus?