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Alan

I like how the lines really add detail to the video

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Gabriella

i love how lines rlly add detail to the picture

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Mattie (1 like)

I like the art and feel it goes really well with the story. I am unclear on how the wolf and bunny become friends. Traditionally, they are enemies so I want to know more about how they became crime-fighting friends. The only thing I would change is making it clearer on how the bunny and wolf became friends. Really original idea!

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Sara (1 like)

I liked the fact that the characters have backstories that help direct the action.
It was a little unclear what caused the main character to change her mind about getting involved in solving the problem- what was the incident that convinced her to change her course?
Show character reflection- overcoming negative events from the past usually involves reflecting and processing the events.

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Hunter (1 like)

I really like the idea and moral of the story.

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Ian (1 like)

It’s a really good story and good drawings.

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kadynce (1 like)

I really like your idea!

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