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Samson, the magical sword afraid to fight

This is a great idea and I love the conflict between the sword and what it was made for. I wonder why it's that way and how will it be able to help the girl along her journey. I am interested in seeing more of this but I'm a little unclear on what the sword and the girls adventures are centered around.

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What if...

I really like the music one, its raw and could really provide different experiences depending on what you were listening to and what you look like. All of your ideas are great and cover often unlooked themes. The music one does make me wonder that if you go to a time period, how do you get back? Its unclear to me that if you are listening to a record from a current artist would you go anywhere? Is it only records recorded at a certain studio?

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What If... Three Ideas by JC Holmes

The time travel mistake fixers is such a great idea. I can already see the infomercial for this and I need to see this on the big screen. I do wonder what the rules would be, and who the main character is and what they are trying to fix. So many possibilities. forgot to take the chicken out of the freezer? time travel fixers! didnt ask the girl to the dance? missed the bus? Nothing is unclear because I sent the time travel fixers back to clear everything up!

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What If Runs in the Family

I am in love with the magical quest for a baby. its such a huge undertaking and alot is trial by fire, so being able to achieve some goals and complete a quest to let you know you're ready sounds fun. I wonder does the path you take on the quest change how the baby will be at the end? Its unclear on how you begin this quest...and what is required to apply?

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"What If?" Ideation

I really really like your dream idea. I had a very similar idea in which you could work a "second job" while in a lucid dream state and I wonder how this world would interact with your woken state. Is there only one company and what are they building?

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