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I love these what-ifs. I really like the first one though. Is it like something kind of like Ready Player One but more of living instead of like video games? I really love the possibilities one might have for that what-if. I would like to understand how that would work too. the fact that people are kind of doing that too makes if seem like a possibility in real life so there's that aspect of that as well. Either way, I love of them.

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I absolutely love all of your what-ifs. I do favor the skeletons wearing skin as clothes though. It makes me think about how they achieve the skin? If like, they have a skin clothing store. Pretty funny to think about and I love it. I would love you to flesh out (hehe) that story more personally. Again, I absolutely love your what-ifs.

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all of these what-ifs were really interesting. I really liked the firefly mailmen one. I really love the idea of little fireflies with their mail being carried. I wonder if the fireflies only deliver mail to other fireflies or to other animals as well. that also brings up the question of whether it was possible for them to deliver mail to humans as well. This also brings up the question where if there's a society of fireflies with other jobs too? do they have their own lives?

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the what-if about the sky looking back at you really brings up the question of if the sky is a person or at least has its own conscience. If you were to flesh out the idea of the sky being some sort of being, that would be really cool and I look forward to your plan with that what-if in particular. All the others were great in itself too but the sky one really intrigued me greatly.

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Austin Smith What If

your second what if really intrigued me. The thought about a blank world really is a little mind-boggling. I wonder how the world became blank or if it were like that in the default. the possibilities you can come up with for that what-if is possibly infinite. What I'm really unclear about is why the world is blank? How did it come to that state of being? are there living beings living there? is there any form of society? I'm really interested in what you can do with that what-if.

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My favorite idea would be the dimension traveling snake. That what-if really makes me wonder about the possibilities of how many imaginative and surreal dimensions and adventures that snake would have. Something I am unsure about is how would the snake be able to travel through dimensions and realities? How did the snake have that ability?

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