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Lost And Found

So happy that someone came to help him! Great story.

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Human Dog

Nice, great job!

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Thea and Luna

Sweet story! Great job.

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Week 8

Such a nice story, what happens next?

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sigh - intro animation !

The art is amazing! Good job for pushing through :)

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The Alta Ave

This is great! It sounds like you guys had tons of fun making this, love the story

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Lewis and his Kite -- Rough Cut

Great story, I like the moral. I think a bit more information about the setting would be good.

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Act 1, 2, and 3

Great story and amazing ending, keep up the good work!

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Pilgrims

I like the story, does this kind of thing keep happening or is there a different ending?

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PTMB

Great story, what time period is this?

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Acts 1, 2, and 3 storyreel

I like the story, great resolution. How did he get to the warehouse and why? Also, was the pac man thing that gave him lives, magic?

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My work

I like the drawings, but I'm not really sure what the story is about. I suggest you maybe narrate or put some dialog. Overall, good work!

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Act 1 and 2 Grimmhilda and the kid

I like how it seems like a bad dream or a lost memory. Is the kid in a coma or is this actually happening?

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The beginning of the story seems interesting. Is the story about the pregnant woman or what happens 10 year later? I suggest you start off with following the act one format and move on from there. Good work!

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Act 1

I like the story! Are the origins of the city a taboo subject that few talk about or are the origins of the city something that literally no one knows? Are there other people that are curious? Over all this is great, keep up the good work!

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Week 4 Submission

I like the moral, nice and classic. Are they nomads? or are just traveling somewhere?

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Week 4 Submission

I like your moral. What made the other cowvoys not want to be friends with him?

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Story Spine (Avery)

I really like the moral. Also, this is a great to describe people's emotions and how they handle them.

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Week #4 Video

This is such a nice story, I immediately liked your character. I like how in the end, Zelv helped other kids overcome their fears.

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Gold Rush

I like how you used the format and made him realize how important family is.

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TJs Desire

Love the story and the art.Is there a reason she prefered to be called TJ? It seemed like at the end she decided to change her name as a form of acceptance?

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The quest for color.

I like this idea, I wonder what he will find on a planet full of colors.

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Week 3

I love the drawing, it looks so mysterious. What's happening in the picture?

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Golem Drawing

This Golem looks so sweet. Is the forest the golem's home?

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Luna in the Shadows

I like how ominous yet inviting it is. Is the person with the weapons Luna?

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