The Story of a Reptilian Vampire

The story has great animation and I like the voiceovers, great job!

Dream

I like the story and the voiceovers are really good, great job!

Doodle

I really like your story! It is very creative and I love the pictures.

Jonathon Sniffer

I had been watching all your videos from the very beginning and I think you have approved a lot and have done a very good job.

Ana, Andrea, Walker, Donivan

Make the picture more clear and center the pictures so you can’t see the words in it. Why did the guy have to die, how did he die? Others than that the storyline was pretty good.

Act 1 2 and 3

I think you could add a name for the girl instead of just saying “she”. You could center the drawings better so you can see the whole drawing. I like the creativity of the drawings.

Ryan

The speaking goes really high and loud in different parts of the video. Your drawing weren’t that clear. You storyline was ok.

Lulus Adventure

I like the drawings, but I think you could adjust the pictures so that you can’t see the writing in them

Golden dream

I think you could’ve had more people talking. Clear up your pictures a little better, other than that your storyline was good.

4

There isn’t much of a storyline. I think you could add more things to make it more interesting. You have good drawings.

Act 1, 2, 3

I think that you could think about naming the kids, clear up your drawings a little bit, but otherwise you had a really good storyline, great job!

Milo and Connor

I like the pictures and your story spine is really good, can’t wait for act 3.

Lewis and his Kite

This story is really good, can’t wait for your act 3!

Trail of tears

I really like your pictures and your storyline, the sound gets a little scratchy at some points.

Way Home ACT 2

Good pictures the only thing I would say is to add a voice over just the help viewers understand what happening a little better.

Jonathon Q. Sniffer; Act 1 and 2

I really like the story idea and the pictures, great job!

Cowspiracy Acts 1 + 2

I like the art work, can’t really understand what you are saying.

Act 1 Storyreel for Luna

I really like your drawings and your storyline makes sense with the pictures, great job!

Toxic Perfectionism in Parenting Act 1

I like your drawings but I can’t really understand what your saying in your video.

Jonathon Q. Sniffer: Story Spine.

I really like the idea and I also like your drawings.

Act 1

I really like the idea, but I think in your video you could speak up more.

Act 1 Storyboard

I really like your storyline, good work!

Oregon Trail

I think your pictures are good but I think that you could speak clearer and louder.

Story spine

I like your story spine but I think you could’ve add some pictures.

STory SPine

I liked your story spine and I also like that you used lots of color on your drawings.