Earth's lament

Incredible animation and great story.

complete storyboard cloud surfing

Super interesting story and incredible detail and drawings.

Week 7 Submission

WOW. This story is so in depth and there are such subtle hints and images that give more context to the story. That is so cool. The artwork is also fantastic. This is a great video with great animation. Nice job!

Jeane's story: Act One

I like the drawings, and the sudden dark turn of the story was amazing.

Story Xperiential Week 4 Submission

I like the moral of the story and think that your story has a pretty nice way of showing and explaining it.

Story Spine

I like the interesting story. I also love the opportunities the main character has for character development.

Lewis and his Kite -- Story Spine

I love how your story starts off relatively simple in the beginning, but later suddenly turns into something magical. I also wonder if there is some sinister reason why the mother doesn't want Lewis to leave the house.

cool epic story (epic)

This is an interesting and complex story. I love the ideas you got going on and think this story could evoke some real emotions.

Xiao Fe

This is super interesting. The thought of realizing your friends are bad people, just because of looking at their real self seems pretty sad, but it also brings up the thought of people being able to change. Very engaging idea and story.

story spine

Thats such a fun and interesting story!

Danylo's world.

I love the perspective and the art is amazing. It is an incredibly atmospheric look into the world you made.

Leaf dude

I love the simplicity and perspective of the image. It compliments the regular and common nature of a simple leaf but there is one small thing about it that is not normal. Nice.

What if?

Really nice drawings and thought provoking what ifs. Nice.

What If

Fantastic visual style and drawing. Also, the what ifs are really great.