Jett in his World

Love the water color, I think it adds to the whimsical concept! Maybe using lighting or perspective to put Jett more in the fore front so the audience knows he is the main character of this story!!

The Prisoner In His Cell

THE FLICKERING LIGHTS IS SO COOL I GASPED. I think you emphasized the terrible conditions of where he is and the obvious mistreatment he is facing. I think if you wanted to show more of his kind nature have him doing something to show, like petting his cat/looking at her lovingly. Maybe the cat is actually a stray who comes and visits him through his cell window and he feeds her treats! Excited to see where his story goes!!

World of Bubble Pop

Love the use of color and the addition of the people in the background to show how majority live in bubbles! The warmth and happy expressions of Tea against the cool colors and shyness of Alfred make them a great contrasting duo! Im wondering if others in bubbles look down on bubble-less people? If they do, maybe you could emphasize that by having people in the background looking at Tea with disgust, while tea continues to be a happy go lucky gal and pays them no mind!

Farron in the Valleys

Really love the design of Farron and what seems to be his crow buddy! I think maybe adding snowcaps and some houses onto the mountains would help with making it look more friendly and inviting, and adding some wilting flowers and trees could help make the valleys look extra toxic!

Week 3, by Jiwoo :)

Love the composition of this piece,perspective like that can be very difficult to convey but I think you did a great job with it!. It also highlights how grand this library is, which I think is very important for the concept of this story. Perhaps adding more detail to the library to make is seem cluttered would be a good idea, as I imagine a library for all lost memories would be pretty overcrowded! Cant wait to see more of Stella and Mr. Pencil and where the story will lead them!

Leo finds a Heart

Love the composition and your use of color. The cold tones of the surrounding snowlike environment vs the warmth of the heart really emphasize the need this character has for it! With the heavy focus on the heart, I am less likely to notice the contraption holding up the heart ( I believe it may be bones??). I would say if they are an integral part of the story, maybe use the warm colors to highlight along with the heart! But overall a really strong piece!

Dionne the Silverfish: Character Profile

I love Dionne so much and am excited to see what her mission from the silver king is, and if she will be caught for loving to read books instead of eating them! I think because silverfish have a simplistic look maybe the use of color as well as dionnes glasses can help her stand out even more from the rest!

What if...

These are some very interesting ideas! I love the comedy of the second option, the irony of candidates approval going up the less qualified and incompetent they are is great, and creates a nice critique on politics. I also love the pure teenage like rebellion that could take place with the proton idea, and am extremely curious how exactly you would explain having 2 lives at once. Overall, I would say if you were looking for more of a comedic approach to a story, 1 and 2 are great options, meanwhile the 3rd could make a great sci-fi piece!

What If Teaser

I really love the ideas, and I think all of them are exceptionally great if you are looking to focus on world-building! Story-wise I think the last idea would be the easiest to create, as the premise is already there of "what would the life of an extremely tall person in a shrinking society be like?". However, I think all are very strong and you could create a very unique and fun story for whatever you choose!

Add a Title

Perhaps adding ways to filter submissions by most/least comments! I like to comment on submissions that have the least activity and would be nice to have an easier way of finding them than manually scrolling through!