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Fighting the Light
crazy photoshopping, maybe stay consistent to a single color palette to establish a tone
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Sandys Room
The charter looks cool, but why is the thing on the desk floating, and maybe add more context, don't know what the panting represents int he story
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character profile earthquake girl
Cool character, but she seems very similar to quake, also they both feel like there powers are curses
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Character Profile: Flaron Flamell
Really cool concept.seems kinda like the fire punch character, in how he's engulfed by flames
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