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Creative Journey (WIP) (Sarah Estes)

Love the artwork. I wasn’t sure about what the story was about, but don’t feel bad… we didn’t finish either. :)

Keep up the great work! Looks amazing!

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love

I love the feeling and message of this story. Awesome job!

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Sam and Bailey

Very creative! The concept took me a while to figure out, but I get it now.
Great job!

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Bean. (Full Storyboard)

Loved the sound work and art.
It was a little long and I had a hard time following along. But other than that, excellent work! Loved it!

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The Potion Shop

I liked the ending where they were shown to be harmless.

Nothing confusing.

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Borealis - Story Spine

Excellent art and I love the story. I like the caffeine part of the plot (doing what he can to stay awake).

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"Hello" Story Spine

The computer wants a friend. One part glossed over is that after the computer is fixed and left alone, he tries to dial up other systems, but just gets the old “this number is no longer in service”… sad computer! Looks over and notices something he hasn’t seen before… the smart phone.

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"Hello" Story Spine

The idea would be that he does ignore the gestures from the computer… kinda like “ugh, leave me alone!”. We have several ideas on how the computer would communicate; slide the mouse to nudge, sounds and subtle screen messages. Thanks for the feedback!

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"Hello" Story Spine

Thank you! Yes, there are several story “holes” in the spine. The basic idea was to highlight social media, cloud sources… basically, without the internet, he’s a brick. We are going to use sounds and gestures to communicate more, but no dialog. We just plugged in “tries to communicate” as a high level place holder. So much more to do with the characters as well… tried a few anamorphic adjustments… some looked scary. :)

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UGS Week 2

I really like how they both share the same desires (like others have pointed out). But I am very interested in how these two will interact in this story. How will they find common ground and both achieve what they want or need?

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Six Characters in Four Minutes

Love the intro. I look forward to seeing how this story develops and yes, you have your work cut out for you with so many characters! :). I agree with some here that have concern over the overall plot. I am sure you have an excellent idea on how to bookend this story and I look forward to seeing it!

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Meet Declan

I look forward to seeing the plot come to life. I like the initial idea and the artwork looks great.

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