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Naz & Lili

Loved the framing and the use of light and shadows. Keep the good work!

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Porcelain bird

Loved the story and the knowledge you have in framing, loved the frames from up high. Nice work!

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E L I X I R

Very nice work, loved that you told a story only with visuals, no dialog.

Maybe was me, don't know... but did't get what was the meaning or importance of the sword? Other than that, great characters and story.

My favorite thing about this short is how you were able to build this world with the right amount of details and I believed I was in the dessert, I believed I was inside the pyramid collecting the green elixir. The narrative was amazing, good work.

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Grandpa & The Machine

Loved the drawings, loved the dialogues, the only thing that felt odd to me was when the reactor falls and suddenly he finds it again, I feel the reactor missing wasn't necessary.

Loved the story, short and sweet, very compelling, I wanted to know what was going to happen the next scene. Nice work!

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Week 1: What If

Loved the future self idea, feels is like a self love, self acceptance story.
I wonder if the character is a kid and the future selfs are like a teenager, a adult and a old lady/man, and what the kid will learn from them.
Why is this happening now?

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What if...?

loved the birthday/nation holiday because I see it as the character doesn't know and suddenly that morning everyone is wishing him happy birthday in public transportation.
I wonder how this happened?
Is this the first birthday this happens? why?

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"What If's" - Shayleen

Loved the seasons ideas, can imagine characteristics based on the season and this can be fun and chaotic (in a positive way).
I wonder if this takes place on a "seasons" HQ.. or something like an office space.
not unclear but a question... Do humans know this is happening?

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What If Questions

liked kids swapping childhoods with parents because I feel the kid wished this wanting to be an adult now, thinking it was all fun and games. Then the kid goes into this amazing adventure that teaches him "everything has its moments in time, good and the bad, just have to enjoy it".
I wonder if this could be a wish a group of friends wished, and 4 kids, adult looking, go on to jobs and adults stuff together. Realizing parents are doing the best they can.
the following I guess is a question for next step into de development but "how the wish becomes reality"?

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