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Lonely Ghosts - Finished Story Reel

Thanks for the compliment, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-D

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Lonely Ghosts - Finished Story Reel

Thanks so much for your kind words, and I wish you luck in the future as well! :-D

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Une Masquerade Ridicule

You're welcome. :-D

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Legends of Surf

I like your drawings, and great job!

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“Cornelius the Chameleon”

I love your drawings, and great job on the story!

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Une Masquerade Ridicule

Your story is so amazing! I love that the artist so cheerful and funny, and I love their dynamic together. From the first few second I was hooked, and great job!

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Storm Hero - Final Storyreel

I love the story and how detailed both the character arc and the drawings were. Super job Team XTeam BR!

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Sheldon Takes Flight!

I love the journey Sheldon went through and that despite it all, he never gave up and was able to reached the island with his grandfather. I also love the illustrations and the animated portions. Great job Team The Deep Inkers!

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Oval - Story Spine

I love the story and that Kirk is able to have a two-way conversation with Ra. I was a little confused as to how people found out about Kirk and the power of Oval. Overall, great job!

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Love and Death Story Spine

Your story is very intriguing, and I like that you gave death personality and feelings instead of it just being the stereotypically evil Grim Reaper. I was a little confused how Dr. Diaz was able to use up her candle; did she talk to Death and ask them to cut up her candle, did she wish/pray for a miracle but didn't know her lifespan was shortening, or was there another way? Another thing I wanted to add is that I like your character designs.

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Rusty the rooster

I love the amount of detail and love you poured into your drawings and into Rusty's expressiveness. Also, Rusty sounds like a very fun character, and I wonder how he will combat the inevitable wave of changes that he will eventually accept.

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What if the dinasour are back

I love this concept! Also, I was a little confused if Rex was born with his telepathic power or gained it somewhere else and if the other dinosaurs also had telepathic powers. I also like that he looks intimidating on the outside but is really nice on the inside.

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ECHO

Echo is so sweet, and I love that he cares about Hugo a lot. I wonder who or what assigned Echo to Hugo, and does Echo communicate with the other shadows? Also, I like your drawings, especially the last one with the wonderful shading; was it charcoal?

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Character Profile - Croxi

Your animation and illustrations are beautiful, and I love that his cheery face is a stark contrast to the captain's more solemn expressions. Since the captain has a more serious expression than him, I wonder if his cheerful personality ever got on their nerves. Also, did he become a member of their crew by being the captain's son, a stowaway, or because of something else? Your story sounds amazing!

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Simon The Sincere Skunk (Week 2)

Simon sound like a super swell skunk! I also like the moral he wants to convey, and I wonder if he will meets any animals that will befriend him. I also wonder what caused him to try masking his insecurity with confidence.

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Meet Bailey - The 5 dimensional Spirit

I love this concept, and Bailey is intriguing. I wonder how his human was able to break free from Bailey, and did the human ever see or talk to Bailey? This story can be pulled into many directions.

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What If?

I like all of your ideas, but I think my favorite is # 1. There is a lot of potential here, and I wonder why an old vampire would adopt a middle school girl; are they related in some way? Do they like each other? Keep up the good work!

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What If...

My favorite is the alien idea with the ancestral tree as a close second. It's amusing to think about what the aliens think of us, and since the Earth is a zoo to the aliens, are there zookeepers, or is it a free-range zoo? Do aliens have to pay money to look at us, and is there a gift shop with human "artifacts"?

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What If - Álvaro Galiana's

All of your ideas are intriguing, and your images are so detailed and pretty. The second idea is my favorite, and I love the concept of enemies becoming great friends. I was a little confused if the person spying on the army was a hunter or just someone who lived in the forest. I wonder what made them enemies in the first place, and did they become friends by spending enough time with each other, and was fighting a common enemy involved?

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What if

All of your ideas are great, and your third idea is my favorite. I was a little confused as to what would happen if a duplicate of someone looked at a reflective surface. Would that create another duplicate world of the duplicate's, or would the originally duplicated world not have any reflective surfaces? I wonder if all of the duplicates live in the same world, or are there an infinite numbers of worlds? Is it possible for a duplicate to realize that it is living someone else's life, and try to do something about it?

Another cool concept is the titan idea. I was a little confused if the sunlight was blocked for one town or for many towns whenever a titan moved. I wonder how often do the titans move and how the locals feel about them, and how long have the titans been around? By the way, I love your different art style with each idea.

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What if...

Your artwork is fantastic, and I love your use of color with each idea. My favorite was the second idea. I wonder how the family and locals will respond to the corporate coffee shop, and will the regular customers to the family-owned coffee shop remain loyal? Also, the paintbrush idea was a close second, and what would the paintbrush's interests be?

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What If? - Croxi

All of your ideas are amazing, and it's cool that you used different styles for each idea. I love the cursed pirate ship idea and where the story can go. For example, who cursed the ship, does it have a ghost, and how does the captain respond to this? It was a close second to my favorite one with the moon. I love the concept of these nocturnal creatures teaming up, and their designs are lovely. I'm curious though as to how the humans were able to capture the moon, and how well our heroes will get along.

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What if? - Luis Rivera

All of your "what if" questions are interesting, and the one that stood out to me the most was the robot one. I like the concept of seeing a robot-controlled society, and are the robots hostile to humans?

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