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What if?

I liked the idea of the drawings coming to life. A question I had was does the artist view the drawings as a blessing or a curse? Would they share their talent and make things for others or would they hide it and suppress the drawings because itʻs an unordinary type of talent? Also, would every single thing the person draws come to life, or are only the selected doodles coming to life?

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What if..?

I liked the last idea of the unlucky girl. My question would be does she fall victim to more common accidents like vehicle crashes or does she go through crazy/unique accidents? For the first "what if," my suggestion would be to have the boy eventually make it to Earth and have to experience the planet. Would he enjoy it or become disillusioned by all the issues and modern problems we face today?

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3 What Ifs

Props on the sound effects; I thought they engaged the viewers. Personally I liked the 2nd one, about mothers choosing between the details of their kids' death. It made me wonder which choice would be better/more popular. Also, would the "other intelligent life" be aliens or other non-human creatures already existing on this planet?

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What If? - Emily Matthews

I liked the transitions in each "what if" question. I thought the moving eyes and the fade-in ghost was an interesting way to engage the eye and props to you for the extra work that took. In regards to the first "what if" with different languages, how would people overcome the language barrier? Would it be an isolated world, where no one could communicate or would people resort to maybe signing or using a special gadget to communicate? If you were to go with the last "what if," my suggestion is to show a day in the life of the live room mate basically being haunted by the ghost. Does the ghost go to class/work with the main character? Maybe the live person canʻt see the ghost at all?

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I enjoyed your characters and your unique ideas. I personally liked the chess idea best. A question I had was if you were to use the social media idea, would there be a specific platform/app that people would/should be limited to for communications? Great work!

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