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Magic lies within the clouds

The voice acting is making Pixar jealous, although it can be a little hard to understand. I love all the detail it brought to your characters. Great job!

8

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"Eclipse"

The images were really neat -- among the best I've seen. My one suggestion would be to lower the music volume so that the narration is more audible. Great job!

8

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The princes and the secret

Y'all's story is awesome, and the visuals aid that a lot. My one comment is that the audio software does the narration a disservice, and could be improved with a person narrating it as opposed to a computer.

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James and Kyle

First of all, the music pulls the video together. I also like how clear the story is, and how you used narration by the characters. Great job!

8

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The Life of the Spider in the Corner

The visuals are really cool, but I'm very confused. I can't really tell what the story is, so clarifying that would improve the video significantly.

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Flora and Fauna

This story is so sad, but I love how that leads to the moral of the story, which is to let go of your sadness.

7

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Act 3

I love the visuals, but without audio, I'm struggling to understand the story and its moral.

7

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Trail of tears

I'm a little confused and feel like some of the minor beats are a little disjointed. That said, I think you have a great moral, to go for what you want.

7

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Act 3

This story is so heartfelt, and I love the moral that we need to focus on what we have, rather than what we don't.

7

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Act 1, 2, & 3

I love the hope for progress contained in this story. I aslo felt like there was an additional moral to the story -- work out your differences with others.

7

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Draw Your Life (Ted's Minor Beats - Act 3)

It brought me so much joy how it all worked out in the end, and I interpreted the moral of the story to be pursue what you want in spite of obstacles.

6

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Lil nee act 2

I'm a little bit confused about where the story is going, but I'm really excited to see.

6

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Act 1 and 2

I've kept up with your video for several weeks now, and it's one of the best stories. Y'all do such a good job at tying together all the little details with simple but effective artwork.

6

Week

ferris and gordon crazy insane adenturwe ft mozila fox

I like the story a lot. My one suggestion would be to make your narration a little more fluent with fewer breaks.

6

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Act 1 & 2

This video does a really good job at having a good story and great artwork. Really cool!

6

Week

Banished Family

The art is really neat, and I love how its layout resembles a comic strip. That said, the echoing audio made it pretty hard to hear and follow the story.

6

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Austin's Story

I think that the illustrations did a good job of portraying the story, but I think it could have been improved with narration. If not narration, a little more clarity on the side blurb.

5

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Act 1

Our group used they/them pronouns too, I love that you did that.

5

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Act 1 Storyreel

I love all of the character you brought to Fynn at the beginning. It really helped me to connect and engage with the story after that.

5

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Act 1 story

I love the story! My one recommendation would be to include the moral at the end. I think it would just help to tie everything together in the end.

5

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Jonathon Q. Sniffer: Story Spine.

The artwork made me laugh so hard. Keep up the good work!

5

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Act 1

I really like the story, and I'm curious to see where it's headed, because I feel like you've really left your options open.

5

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Earth's lament

I love how clearly the artwork conveys the story. Also, mad props on the Star Wars beginning.

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Fighting the Light

The art is super cool, although I would add a little bit of explanation of how he meets the farmer because I feel like the story just skips a little bit.

4

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The Great Protector Trials

I love the story, and I think it would support that to use color in your images, particularly at the end. I think it could make it a little more joyful when he accomplished what he want to and accepts himself.

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