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Earth's lament

i love all the drawings!

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Her soulmate was her enemy

so good! i love the story!

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TJ's Ultimate Desire

i love all the details! and the drawings!

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Shock and Mars

i love your drawing!!

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Ana, Andrea, Walker, Donivan

Maybe take off the moving from the pictures so you can see the pictures better. I like the message of the story.

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Act 1 2 and 3

Maybe make your sentences longer and add more details. You were really loud and clear.

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Ryan

I like the pictures. Maybe have all of you at the same volume.

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Lulus Adventure

You should take of the moving on the pictures so you can see it better. You good at explaining stuff.

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Golden dream

Maybe have all the team members speak. And the speed of your speaking

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4

You were very loud and clear

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Act 1, 2, 3

Maybe less background noise.

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Oregon trail

I like your idea. You could talk a little more clear.

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Jeff and Jack

Maybe Add more details

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Act 1 and 2

I like your drawings!

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Weighted- Act 2

I like the expressions!

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Act 1 and 2

I love your drawings!

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Gold Rush

I like the drawings

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Act 1 and 2

I like the story maybe you could add a close up picture

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Trail of tears

I like the story. Why were the Indians mad? Good voice level koob.

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The tail of Inji

I rlly like the idea and how descriptive it is, maybe just talk a little louder

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Gold rush

Thank you very much😎

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The Princess Act 1

I like the music but maybe put it a little quieter.

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Jeff and Jack

Like the concept good work!

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Act 1

I think it could be explained better. What happened to him after the dust storm?

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Gold Rush

I like the story. The drawings are a little bear tho.

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