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Forever Turning Jade

Wow this is already a whole full length film! Love it!
I have some questions: Why does the creature not kill Jade? There has to be something that makes them different that the plant creatures can recognize.
Also the creatures, while they are right with their ambition to restore balance in the rainforest, appear scary and uninviting, they are killing one of the researchers in front of Jades eyes. My first instinct would be to fight them and not live with them to help. Maybe you can show an emotional side of the dying rainforest, so Jade can see and not just react to what they hear from the explanation.

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Cian and the Metaverse

Love the concept! Can already imagine the short film. I always love daily tasks being shown in animation (like in Ghibli movies for example), it motivates me to do them myself. Like the others said, for him to choose to stay offline there must be kind of an impact when he does the daily tasks. Or something outside of his house that show him that it is indeed an advantage to stay out of the metaverse.

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What if ideas

Very fun ideas!! The bubble idea works so good as a short animation. I can imagine all those scenes, how she tries to break the bubbles or how she can contact them. Can there be bubble clusters where the bubbles of some turn into one big bubble? Also the concept of bubbles being round and soft and secure even when colliding with other bubbles as a metaphor for "not offending anyone" while the girl being without a bubble can be scary and hurting because she may destroy the soft bubbles, kind of like "truth hurts sometimes"

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What If Runs in the Family

what an amazing presentation! Watched it 3 times haha! I love the baby quest story! Would be so awesome to watch all those fun ideas that come with this concept. Is the journey Baby related? Is it a Baby world and they'd have to defeat monsters that usually bothers babies? Or is it totally unrelated but the quest strengthen them as a couple to be better parents?

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Pietro - Write for Animation Team

Oh wow love your ideas!! The music is a great addition! Love all of them. For a shortfilm I can really invision the towels one the best, it would be so visually appealing. But the cigarette one is so interesting! Like how does the cigarette know it will harm her? Can they read the warnings on the packaging? Will it take the rist and die when being smoked?

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What ifs - click me!

They are all so great! I really like the third one. Maybe humans think about virtues like strength, intelligence, being fast, shooting training etc all those scifi training stuff and they send the strongest one in, and in the end a comedian or a nerdy fast food addict would've been the best fit.

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What If...

Maybe I'm adding a comment twice, because I can't see mine on here for some reason.. So here again: I really love the alien idea! First thought I had was, what if they'd come to earth for their vacation, they'd take over a human body and enjoy being dumb for a little while (since Aliens are so well developed). The zoo idea is great! So many questions: Are they invincible? Do they come here or do they watch us from above or on their TV or something? Do they just watch us or also study us? Can they controll earth, for example give us things so we don't get bored like zookeepers give monkeys little challanges to keep them engaged (Covid, earthquakes etc) Maybe like we do with ants, we destroy something and see how they'd behave.

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What If...

Loved the Alien one haha first thing I thought of what if it wasn't just a zoo but maybe a vacation escape for Aliens to take over a human body and enjoy being dumb one time (since Aliens are always so highly developed). The zoo idea holds so many possibilities: Are they invisible when they come here? Do they even come here or just watch us from above or on their TV? Can they control us and give us things to interact with so we aren't bored, like they give monkeys toys to play (for example covid, earthquakes etc like we do with ants, destroying things to study how they'd behave) Are we just there for fun or are we also studied?

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What if...

Oh I love the third one with the other earth! Can be such a great drama concept, for people to learn to overcome regret. Maybe the story can show a life that looks amazing on the outside but the dots are connected differently and in the end the life that the main character already leads is still a really important one, just different.

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What if thoughts ... elements ...age

Oh love your ideas! The last one is so cool! The first one would also be such an interesting concept. Like is it all random or do certain kind of thoughts turn into certain kind of objects? Specific thoughts that turn into leaves to float around f.e. all happy thoughts turn into leaves to float around for people to catch them or sad thoughts turn into ocean drops. I can picture some kind of underlying climate change mesage underneath the story. What if the leaves get less and less (implying that the happy thoughts get less and less) and the sad thoughts increase and with this they increase the sea level cause there are too many sad ocean drop thoughts?

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What if...

Oh the record player one is very cool! So many questions, who made that player? How will they get back? Can they bring something with them? Can they change the past? How can you connect the timelines, so the story doesn't play in just one musical era? Does it only apply to the times the music was recorded or can someone also jump to f.e. the classical era cause an orchestra recorded the old music on vinyl?

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What if Walls Could Talk?

Oh great concept! Would work really well as a comedy but I also thought of it maybe being a crime or mystery story. The walls can have different personalities for example the four walls in the kitchen are a little group and can communicate with the three walls from the living room and the walls from the bathroom etc. maybe they can also move things kind of like casita in Encanto. The wall behind the sofa can be the happy one, cause they can watch TV all the time and the one with the shower can be grumpy, cause they'd have to watch naked people all the time and get wet. Maybe they see a crime going on in the appartement. Or the people owning the place make plans to tear down some walls and they have to try preventing that.

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