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Week 8

The art is adorable!!

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An ode to loss

Thanks!

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An ode to loss

Thank you! I was very proud of of our teammates for creating the music! I am feel better and thank you!

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An ode to loss

Thank you so much!! <33

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An ode to loss

Thank you!! <3

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Aquiva

I love the art! The story was very compelling!

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Benny’s Adventures (Week 8)

Terrific story! I loved the art and the whole storytelling was absolutely brilliant!

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BBE

The art is adorable! I wish there was a bit more narration through to clear things up a bit. Overall I loved the music choice and the art and I could get a nice feel of what was happening regardless!

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Story Xperiential Week 8 Submission - The Story Of KiKi MauMau

I liked the story a lot! Something I'd love to see would different types of panels maybe so we could see more angles. Overall though I think it was a nice and cute story.

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The Magic of Music

I love the colors and the music! The narration felt really smooth and I liked it! One thing I would love to see would be more variety of artwork, maybe different angles. Overall though I think you did a great job!

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What if teasers

Seems super cool! I can't really hear audio on my side so I would fix that next time but otherwise this seems super cool- can't wait!

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What IF? video

All of these seem super cool! The last idea is so cool though, how would it work? What interactions would they have? Is the dog part of the baby's family?

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What if there was a sacred tree, a mushroom person, and a tanuki?

I love these ideas! The tanuki looks absolutely adorable! I wonder what the backstory is around the tanuk.

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Week 1 What Ifs

I like your art style a lot! I think all of the ideas are pretty great but I wonder how the first one will work. Can't wait to see the end product.

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Ideas

The last one is pretty creative! It would be super cool to draw out- I like it!

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Please ignore this, this is in the wrong week

Woah I love the first idea! It seems very creative and fun to draw.

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What if...

Thank you sm!!

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What if...

Thank you!! I'll work on making things more clear next time.

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What if...

Yes thank you! My partner and I were brainstorming and I think we wanted it to represent dementia, so back to the character design and drawing board I go! :)

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What if...

Thank you so much!!

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What if...

Thank you so much! Unfortunately the audio got cut off like you said but what I meant to say was that "What if there was a boy who disappeared with every tear". I'll try to make sure the audio is good next time! The dad idea is the one me and my partner are mostly focused on actually! We're still working on a better 'summary' as to say so I condensed it into the main idea :D. Thank you so much for your feedback and confidence!

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