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Act 1, Act 2 and part of Act 3.

Ahhhh thank you so much! i use procreate with the ink bleed brush and apple pencil and Levi uses Adobe Spark :)

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Acts 1, 2, & 3

i really love this story it seems very happy and childish until the monster plant lashes out. i think it would be nice to know how she knew the plant was magical.

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Terra's act 1,2 and 3

i really like this plot :] and i think you all did a wonderful job with telling the story with pictures. i think it would be cool to know how terra's aunt has powers as that seems important.

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Gold rush

this is such a cool idea! i think that it would be important to know why the ryder and his friends wanted to go get gold since his parents are so rich. is he trying to prove himself to them? to his friends?

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Earth's lament

also why do they need earths energy?

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Earth's lament

THIS IS SO COOL :D the animation was amazing with the sounds you went above and beyond! i am a bit confused about the two explorers ended back on the mother ship. i assume they got beamed up or something but other then that this was great!

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The tale of Bing

this is really cool :] i think it would be cool to see how the mongol army damaged the rest of japan while the girl and Samurai travel to the city. like were there familys torn apart by war and lively hoods destroyed? how did all the samurai being gone affect japan? keep up the good work!

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Back To You

*world

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Back To You

ahhhhh this is so cool :D i would love to see how this ghost reincarnation works and if it's common knowledge. i think that would be really cool would building!

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Flora the witch!

I really really like this idea it seems very whimsical and relaxed. i cant wait to see where this will go!

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Act 1 Storyreel

I really like the story so far! you mentioned Fynn didn't talk to a lot of the other bugs at the park because he felt content with his current friends so i think it would be cool to see him interact with other bugs he normally doesn't to get home.

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Act 1 Storyboard

i liked how the story is going so far i think you explained the plot very well and nothing was confusing.

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What if... A man had 3 lives, A teen could see and change his future, A criminal was judged by a long lost family member

I really like the 3 lives idea because how would he find out he had multiple lives?

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