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Ryan What If's

Hi Ryan! I really like the "What if..." story ideas you came up with! The last story, about an extremely quiet world raises a lot of interesting questions. Is it just humans that are silent, or are other sounds, like cars and birds very quiet as well? What do your characters do to change the world? -- I think the other two idea's are great as well. Your design for the frog who "gives up everything to save his world" is very visually interesting! His shocked expression and outfit made me want to find out more about his character!

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WHAT IF... by Francisco Gonzalez

First of all, great choices for your storytelling images! They are each so expressive and give me an instant understanding of the personality of your characters! -- I think each of your "What if..." questions are compelling, but I am most curious to find out what a child would do with an Elixir of Immortality. Would he drink it himself? Or give it to his burro? Are there any drawbacks to using it?

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