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Week 7 Submission

I like how you explored a varitey of emotions in your story.

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full story!

Great illustrations and storline!

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ALL ACTS--ANIMATION

Your story has a great moral and the storlyline is clear and easy to understand. Also, great visuals!

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Act 3

The storyline became clear when I read your description, however, it was a little confusing when I watched the video becuase of the lack of audio. I really liked your illustrations, they look very proffessional.

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Avery & Act 1-3

The story line was well organized and the drawings you have are great!

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Night Light Storyreel

The drawings were great! I love how you brought the characters to life with their expressions.

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The accident - Act 2 + Act 1

I like how you left a cliff hanger at the end, very cool.

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Tristen and Brad PARTY Act 2

The art, narration, and music all fit very well together!

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Act 1 and 2

I like your art, the way you used color in this was very interesting.

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Lux Week 6

I like the story you have. Your audio recordings could be a bit louder but other than that it's great!

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Hunter

You have a very clear plot line.

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flora the witch act 2&1

Your drawings are great!

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Act 1 and 2

I love the storyline and the art flows very will with it.

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act 1

I'm a little bit confused about how color started a war, but you have a very interesting plot and I'm curious to see what else you come up with!

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Act 1 story

I like how you brought unique personality to your characters.

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Un día en culichi

Your illustrations look great!

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Celeste Act 1 Story Reel

I really liked the idea. Some parts of the story seemed a little bit random but I suppose that could be fine if you want things to reveal themselves throughout the story.

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Act 1

Your illustrations fit quite well with the plot, making it an interesting video to watch.

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Aspen's Act 1 Story Reel

I really like the idea of a world inside a balloon, very cool.

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Story spine

I enjoyed your drawings, great use of color!

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Lewis and his Kite -- Story Spine

Your narration is one of the best I've heard while going through these videos, great job!

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Charlie/Intrusive Thoughts - Story Spine

I really like how Charlie grew throughout the story. Also, your animations are great!

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Week 4

I would've liked to see some color in these drawings but they told the story very well and it was easy for me to follow.

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Gold rush

A gold rush is such a great idea for a story!

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final story spine

I loved the art you did for this! Especially the animals they were great

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