Week 7 Submission

I like how you explored a varitey of emotions in your story.

full story!

Great illustrations and storline!

ALL ACTS--ANIMATION

Your story has a great moral and the storlyline is clear and easy to understand. Also, great visuals!

Act 3

The storyline became clear when I read your description, however, it was a little confusing when I watched the video becuase of the lack of audio. I really liked your illustrations, they look very proffessional.

Avery & Act 1-3

The story line was well organized and the drawings you have are great!

Night Light Storyreel

The drawings were great! I love how you brought the characters to life with their expressions.

The accident - Act 2 + Act 1

I like how you left a cliff hanger at the end, very cool.

Tristen and Brad PARTY Act 2

The art, narration, and music all fit very well together!

Act 1 and 2

I like your art, the way you used color in this was very interesting.

Lux Week 6

I like the story you have. Your audio recordings could be a bit louder but other than that it's great!

Hunter

You have a very clear plot line.

flora the witch act 2&1

Your drawings are great!

Act 1 and 2

I love the storyline and the art flows very will with it.

act 1

I'm a little bit confused about how color started a war, but you have a very interesting plot and I'm curious to see what else you come up with!

Act 1 story

I like how you brought unique personality to your characters.

Un día en culichi

Your illustrations look great!

Celeste Act 1 Story Reel

I really liked the idea. Some parts of the story seemed a little bit random but I suppose that could be fine if you want things to reveal themselves throughout the story.

Act 1

Your illustrations fit quite well with the plot, making it an interesting video to watch.

Aspen's Act 1 Story Reel

I really like the idea of a world inside a balloon, very cool.

Story spine

I enjoyed your drawings, great use of color!

Lewis and his Kite -- Story Spine

Your narration is one of the best I've heard while going through these videos, great job!

Charlie/Intrusive Thoughts - Story Spine

I really like how Charlie grew throughout the story. Also, your animations are great!

Week 4

I would've liked to see some color in these drawings but they told the story very well and it was easy for me to follow.

Gold rush

A gold rush is such a great idea for a story!

final story spine

I loved the art you did for this! Especially the animals they were great