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Act 1 and 2

I like the drawings and how detailed it is looks good

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Act 2

Like the drawings and how you use emotion when you talk

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Act 2 Dream Factory

Good art like the story could make it shorter

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Act 1 and 2

Could speak clearer good idea

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Week five submission

The drawings where good but it was hard to here

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Story board on slavery

I like the dialogue that you have. You should zoom in on the pictures

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Week 5 Submission

I like really like your pictures you used I like how it left you on the edge of your seats

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Cowboys

I like your idea. It’s a good story with good drawings

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Our image

I’m confused on what the colors mean it looks like he not happy that it’s sold out looks great

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Gold Rush

I like the perspective that the different paths have. It looks like he has to choose one looks good

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PIXAR

It looks like they your character is going into a store and people are spying on her. I like how there is a road going down into the place. Looks good

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Village on fire

The emotions on this must be sad. I like how it shows the people evacuating. Looks good

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Please ignore this, this is in the wrong week

The first one was pretty cool. Would they be a way to get out of the endless hallways. Good ideas

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what if - gabe and julia

My favorite one was what if the government was run by cows.
How will they speak.

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