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Story Xperiential Week 4 Submission
I liked how you explained why and how he couldn't have what he wanted all the time. I would like to know more about the character.
Week 2- Character Sheet
I like the contrast between fluffy bunny character and big dark monster. I wonder how Peaches can challenge or stop the monster. Would like to know why the monster is bothering them.
I like the contrast between external and internal and what could be symbolism of the sunlight.
Duke The Ranger
I like how he is very clear on what he likes to do, and his personality, and the variety of images.
I like that the character is a hybrid and you used a native american character and a regular animal and mixed them to make a fun character.
Character Design - Kara
I thought this character is very relatable. The idea of eating cookies to see your future is interesting. I wonder about the source of the character's angst is.
My Character Profile - Aspen
I liked learning about the main character and the problem she faces. I was confused about the glass bubble and how that happened.
Meet our Character
I liked hearing all the details about the tree expressing how the tree felt. I would be interested in knowing more about the girl. Maybe you could add information about the girl and where this takes place.