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Mr. Charcoal in Recovery-Land

Hi
ok, Thanks very much......

8

Week

Wolf and Dragon

Verry good job ¡¡¡¡
Evry thing is well done,drawings, timeing, sound, beautiful story.....

8

Week

Indigo Kid

His idea is good, his way of doing the work is original , but I disn't feel empathy.

8

Week

Naz & Lili

I like de sound, it is melancholy like the story. The drawings are pro, I understood all .......... very nice story board.

8

Week

Porcelain bird

I like this story because the theme is original and sweet. the sound and sound effects are well done, are on time.

8

Week

Por las barbas de mi gato - My Cat´s whiskers

The story is well understood, the drawings are pretty, I like them, the kittens look very cute, what I think is that the narration coud be a little better.

7

Week

Lenny and the Song of the Forest

Hola Antonio
La verdad ahora no se me ocurre algo mágico para la historia, pero te aseguro q lo voy a pensar. Me gustó mucho tu trabajo. Ya te escribo cuando tenga algo mágico q aportarte.

7

Week

Sebas and Mau

Hi Blue Pearls

The story is very beautiful and empathetic, the narration is super good. It is very clear to me, it is kind and punctual. Your drawings are nice and everything has to do with it, it is understood well.........so I don't know waht else I would give for it to be something else to add, something to it to be better about the story board, or another stof, at the momento I can't think in something. I guess Pixar should give us feedback on this point, which is more detail that must be observe and I don't have the elements, I don't know much about, even if a really want to contribute.
Good job, congratulations.

7

Week

Lenny and the Song of the Forest

What a wonder ful World did you invent, I Jost love it.........is clear, nice, well done, the drawings are very "muy bonitos" and I wish there were more people like this joung boy........
What can I tell you to make it stronger...............I realy don't know, I love it as it is,,,,realy
What I can do, is send you a big hug.

7

Week

Croxi - Act 1, 2 and 3

Hi Croxi
It is very beautiful, is clear and the drawings super..........incredible-
I suppose that later you are going to put some kind of sound, noises or water, thing like that would help even more-
Congratulationes, very good job.

7

Week

Smoke Me - A Cigarette in Love

Hi Team
Your sound is super good, the drawings are very nice, thr time you give to things also seemed very COOL to me. What it is not clear to me is de moral...........

7

Week

Cornelius - Act 1, 2, 3

Hi shayleen Smith
I think your work is very good and clear, I also like the drawings. Where you coud improve is in the narration, markmmore the differet emotions, feeling firsthand what happens to the chameleon,

6

Week

Mr. Charcoal in Recovery-Land

Hi Jessica

Thank you for your comments, they did help to accomodate the story. Let's see if they understand better now.

6

Week

Mr. Charcoal in Recovery-Land

Hi Abbie
Thank you for the comments. They did help to accomodate the story. Let's see if it understand better now.

6

Week

Mr. Charcoal in Recovery-Land

Hi Julie
Thanks you very much for your comment. They did help to accomodate the story.
Let's see if you understand better now.

6

Week

Week 6 "No such thing as aliens"

The voice is very nice and is very well narrated. It is even as if we were there in the desert and we saw the dog, with the UFO on top......I don't know how you did that.
I wander if you are going to make this tipe of drawings until the end..........

6

Week

ACT 1 & 2

Hi Team Bethany
It is't confusingis at all, simes very clear to me.
I like when you make zoom to your drawings, but just be ceraful that it stays focus on what you want to present, do not stay in the White part where there is no drawing.
Very nice job.

6

Week

The Majestic: Act 1 & 2

I like this story, the same happen to all over the wold, so we can empathize, The Majestic and all the theaters, I feel you give live very well to the Majestic and all de zone. Yes, that was the feeling or sensation a few months ago.
thit is very original and interesting, I want to see what happen......

6

Week

Underwoof goes under the sea

Hi Flova
What a nice story, is clear and funny, easy going. Visually is also easy to undestand the drawings are very clear and the characters well defined.
Even without sound, Just by seeing the drawings I can understand.
I'm waiting to see what the shark is going to do to him.

6

Week

Sebas and Mau (Act 1 and 2 )

I saw your work without sound and I understood perfectly, it was very well done, the drawings explains very well what is happening and the little cloud around Sebastián is also very explanatory, we can see he is angry or desperate.

6

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SMOKE ME

I like this story, I do feel empathy and it is very clear to me. And then I saw it without sound maybe it's not so clear this way But the truth it's I don't know anymore,because first I saw it with sound.

5

Week

Hero Town Act 1

Please tell me if you are still alive.............hahahah

5

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Hero Town Act 1

Hi Mary

I think you should be continue with your story. It is very beautiful and interesting, you are going for good way, the world has this part that you are talking about. I hope you give yourself the opportunity to mové on, I realy want to see what you have to herossay, because were I live things like that happens every day and the heros are not around, it's not good idea to give mone to the bad ones and yes, we do not know what to do in this case.
The story board is very strong, the subject make it pwerfull because is real problem for many people.
¡¡¡¡¡¡ Good Job ¡¡¡¡¡¡¡

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Princess Alienor_Week 5

Hi
I saw this submission with no sound and I did not unterstand only by the darawings, I think maybe good to do some more drawings so to make it visually interesting.

5

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Billie- Act01

woooooww ¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡.........it is very nice. I like very much. muchas felicidades. good job ¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡

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