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Picture Perfect

Music was nice, kept me engaged. Would recommend more dialogue

8

Week

Fangs make life interesting

That twist at the end was great

8

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Lil nee full story

Love the narration

8

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Science Fair

Love how you added real explosion images, nice touch of realism.

8

Week

Lil monster

Always love a classic fairy tale. Character design was nice and simple, though the description was a little confusing. Overall, great job!

7

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Act 1, 2, & 3

I like the drawings, keep up the good work

6

Week

Oregon trail

This is good, but it was a little hard to hear you.

6

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Act 1&2 Storyreel for Luna

The drawings are good

6

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"Pull" Act 1&2

Story is creative, nice work

6

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Act 1 & 2

Love the drawings, simple but very nice and still detailed.

6

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Act 1 and 2

I like this story, but some more info on the ghost and how the two met and how they became friends would be helpful. Aside from that, this is good work.

5

Week

act 1

A war over color could be a cool story if expanded on a bit more, hopefully you find your Apple pen, cause I'd like to see this more detailed

5

Week

Weighted- Act one

Looks like a professional did this, the drawings were on point and at some moments looked realistic.

5

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Earth's lament

Clean drawings, detailed with shadows and shading.

5

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Week 5 Submission

I like how you narrated in first person, drawings are also really good

5

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Wyoming Act 1

Drawings are nice, Wyoming is a pretty obscure state, I love that choice.

4

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Vlad's Story Spine - "Pull"

This is an interesting idea, can't wait to see where this goes

4

Week

Derek story board

Tree part was a little confusing, but overall, good work

4

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Week #4 Video

Easy to follow since it was test based, very intriguing

4

Week

Ted's Story Spine

Good idea, good story, drawings well done

4

Week

final story spine

The animals are well done

4

Week

Leone

This concept is really interesting, and the thought of knowing when you're going to die is both a scary and somewhat peaceful and calming one.

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Week 3

This is a great drawing with just a pencil

3

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Sammy and Blue

Lighting and shading are great

3

Week

Character in their world

This is great, feels like an actual storyboard scene, easily could be a movie

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