Picture Perfect

Music was nice, kept me engaged. Would recommend more dialogue

Fangs make life interesting

That twist at the end was great

Lil nee full story

Love the narration

Science Fair

Love how you added real explosion images, nice touch of realism.

Lil monster

Always love a classic fairy tale. Character design was nice and simple, though the description was a little confusing. Overall, great job!

Act 1, 2, & 3

I like the drawings, keep up the good work

Oregon trail

This is good, but it was a little hard to hear you.

Act 1&2 Storyreel for Luna

The drawings are good

"Pull" Act 1&2

Story is creative, nice work

Act 1 & 2

Love the drawings, simple but very nice and still detailed.

Act 1 and 2

I like this story, but some more info on the ghost and how the two met and how they became friends would be helpful. Aside from that, this is good work.

act 1

A war over color could be a cool story if expanded on a bit more, hopefully you find your Apple pen, cause I'd like to see this more detailed

Weighted- Act one

Looks like a professional did this, the drawings were on point and at some moments looked realistic.

Earth's lament

Clean drawings, detailed with shadows and shading.

Week 5 Submission

I like how you narrated in first person, drawings are also really good

Wyoming Act 1

Drawings are nice, Wyoming is a pretty obscure state, I love that choice.

Vlad's Story Spine - "Pull"

This is an interesting idea, can't wait to see where this goes

Derek story board

Tree part was a little confusing, but overall, good work

Week #4 Video

Easy to follow since it was test based, very intriguing

Ted's Story Spine

Good idea, good story, drawings well done

final story spine

The animals are well done

Leone

This concept is really interesting, and the thought of knowing when you're going to die is both a scary and somewhat peaceful and calming one.

Week 3

This is a great drawing with just a pencil

Sammy and Blue

Lighting and shading are great

Character in their world

This is great, feels like an actual storyboard scene, easily could be a movie