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Character Ideas

This is a really cute story idea! I love the drawings! I wonder how exactly the frog will realize he has to be happy with himself for the way he is? This is such a neat story idea!

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What if...?

I love the Bill Cypher reference! I think that'd be interesting to see how people would react to villains showing up. What kind of chaos would it create? Especially considering they're villains. Would heroes arrive to save the day?

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“What if” ideas

The art is incredible. So much detail! I love how much effort was put into this! I'm interested in the first and the mythical creatures. Are the creatures friendly? Are they misunderstood? So cool!

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Waterfalls, bus stops, and sheep

The sheep are adorable! It'd make such cute short! Would the sheep avoid listening to the shepherd sometimes? Is that how stuff like hurricanes are made? Such a creative idea!

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Cheeheee

The idea of being a new person in a video game whenever you die is so cool! Would characters become careless with death? Would they keep their memories? So interesting!

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What if Teaser

I love the idea of your soulmate being your enemy. How would the character realize he's their soulmate? How would they stop being enemies? This could be a really cool love story!

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What if??!

I found the idea of magicians living in a magic society interesting. It's something you could really build off of. Is the magic society a secret? Are magicians accepted in our normal society? What kind of challenges do the magicians have to face? I think you could do something with that idea, and it could make for some very interesting character designs!

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